Crying Rain

This is really sad and has a great and strong meaning to it. You did really good with this poem. The one thing that bugs me a bit is: "It ...

Hello there, kitty. Well...I got to maybe...the 15th line and I had to stop myself. Let me just point out a few things. One, the length is just terrible. Something ...

Hey there. First of all: I'd like to point out that you should really use punctuation and capitalize your beginnings of your sentences. It just makes it look nicer. Second ...